Wednesday, 12 February 2014

The adventute in Candyland



written by  Fanni Farkas





To my lovely sister,caring family,helpful friends and best teacher.

Thank you for you kindness,you are in my thoughts.




The adventure in Candyland


























Introduction


Hello, let us  introduce you to ourselves. We are two orthans and we're called Camilla and Eccerfee and we both  live in a forest.We are best friends but not sisters. We do everything together, same as our parents did.We are rich,because a few years ago before are parents passed away, we got paid an incredible ammount because they knew they were close to being dying so,they gave their money to us.
Now we don't go to school.we don't have a parents, we do anything we want to . KIDDING BUT WE ONLY GO TO  TO HIGH SCHOOL FOR 50 MINUTES!

Yes, that's right, we are very lucky. Our fathers paid for us to go to high school and as we are to young so we only go for 50 minutes.


We spend our days in the forest with our loving neighbour,Bill. He lifts us up high enough to reach the cocoa tree, puts us down and makes the cocoa beans into chocolate.''He's amazing'' Isen't he' Camilla always says and I reply politley, ''I agree''.







One day on the way to school one day I called loudly''Eccerfee'' but she couldn't hear me.
I was scared.
So scared
I thought in my mind 'is she lost?'
The worst Saturday ever. I'd have too spend it without my best friend.
I decided to walk further,
And then I saw something amazing,
I looked at it
And saw something amazing
So, I got my bike,
and,
I COULDEN'T BELEIVE IT,
IT WAS BEATIFUL,
I'VE SEEN IT BEFORE IN MY DREAMS...
























Chapter 1

In the forest on that sunny and cherrful day I saw a magical land. And no, I am no kidder.
It was full of toffee appleas.candly floss,gum and it also had pink milk river,then the great suprise was when I saw Eccerfee wandering around the same as me.
''Hi'' she said but then she noticed this book wwhich I amwriting in and cried a bit shelfishly ''Are you really writing OUR book without ME?''
But then lucky for me she added ''its ok''.
'We are so lucky to be here' I thought as we both got some candyfloss.
Suddenly, we spotted a very strange-looking girl.
She had wings, which we agreed was also very weird. They were bubble gum pink wings that looked like the wings that the candymaster had in the book we used to have. Also her t-shirt had a large badge on it that read ''I'm the candymaster, if you need to know where anything is  i'm the one to ask'.
So we walked up to her and asked her if there isanything else we can eat.
She told us to go to the end of the pink milk river and there will be a cupcake elavator and the cupcake elevatorwould lead us to the 2nd layer.
So we followed her intructions and went on the elevator.
The 2nd  layer full of hello kitty. It had hello kitty cupcakes,lollipops,cookies and even some hello kitty dollls.We kept a few of them.

 










The 3rd layer was called 'the Chocolate room'. In the chocolate room there was a cocoa river and enourmous statues.
We saw gianourmous piles of chocolate peices and chocolate cake and everything chocolate. Suddenly we found a nice girl. He told us her name was Sally.
Sally was an assistant in Candland. She was very politeas well. 'Would you like any help' she whispered in her soft, quiet voice. I replied 'yes please. Could you please reach those chocolates for us?'
She reached up, struggling. She was only able to reach them after awhile.
''By the looks of it Camila hates chocolate'' explained Sally to Eccerfee. 'You can tell by the expression onher face' she added.
''Yes I do. It's justall brown and sticky.'' I explained.
''I  just went here for my best friend''



























''Well you're a nice sister then. I'll let you both take a poodle home.''Sally acknowledged.











































''Really''We said at the same time.
'Sure' she approved.
Then she showed us a photo of her, she was so incredibly GORGEOUS!

















''Please can we have a chocolate  poodle and some  candyfloss .'' Ecerfee begged. I don't like chocolate but I just stayed silent.
She answered kindly ''never thought you'd ask!''
''Great '' Eccerfee said empathifically.





































''Bye see you later Sal'mate'' WE smiled at her.
''See you later ''
We Could just about see her in the distance, stepping into her littlecandy cottage.

Camila                                                                                                                                            Eccerfee



                                                   Sally









                                                                     





Me and Eccerfee both agreed that we'd go to the cupcake layer next. You see, we knew there was a cupcake layer because therewas one in the book we used to have.
So we decided we'd go right after we go to Sally's house to ask her where the cupcake apartment is.
When we asked her she said,''Oh its just on the 3rd  apartment''.
We went upthe cupcake elevator again finding ouselves in cupcake heaven.
It was  so delecious smelling,the icing looked so lovely, the decorations were so pretty,and the sprinkles were very colourful.







 That was definitely not all though. Guess who we saw…

Rachael Marks
Our favourite actress.
It turned out she worked at Candyland.
When we saw her we almost fainted.

BY THE WAY WE GOT A LOVELY LETTER FROM HER,
NOW THAT WAS SHOCKING.




























Here is the letter:





Dear Camila and Eccerfee,
thanks for visiting the world of Candy.
You know we haven't had visitors,for,shall i tell you,never,so we are very happy to see you,I would like to give you presents,by the way here is a cheer that you might find enjoyable:
Sugar and spice and all things nice,chocolate mice in the shop pop corn goes pop,pop,pop.
Harribo's stretch out,jelly babies wriggle all about.
I hear ice cream scream, while chocolate gives you a wonderful 
dream.
Marshmellows squash up and down,then they jump into town.
Candy people never frown!!!

Love From
Rachaelxxxxxxxxxxxxx
P.S I signed you two up for cheerleading,so use the cheer for you first audition (tryout)